The Hunter


I found this on yahoo images, I think it fits well with the feel of the story I’m working on

When a young man in a Post Apocalyptic world sets out on his rite of passage into manhood and to gain acceptance from his tribes hunting party he finds himself lost in an unknown and dangerous land where he discovers he has become the hunted and he struggles to learn the truth behind the real reason he was sent on the journey.

This is the next short story or novella I’m working on. Please tell me what you think of the logline. And if it sounds like something you would like to read.